Drafting and Planning - Ancillary Product Feedback

In lesson we carried out peer assessment on the drafts of our ancillary products. The feedback I received will enable me to produce the most effective poster and magazine.

Poster Feedback:

http://chloeoneill1996.blogspot.co.uk/2013/12/blog-post.html

This is the draft of my poster which I showed to the class. The majority of my class liked the poster and thought the image was very effective. They thought the plain, black font was also effective as it produced a professional feel.
However, to improve, they said to change the date to just 'February 2014' as posters are distributed worldwide so theatre dates vary. Also, one of my classmates suggested using another image such as a spy hole. I liked this idea and I may incorporate it in my work as it creates a synergy with the name - 'Flat 6.'

Magazine Feedback:

http://chloeoneill1996.blogspot.co.uk/2013/12/drafting-and-planning-magazine-first.html

This is the draft of my magazine which I showed to the class. They all liked the layout of my magazine and that it is clearly 'horror-themed.' They said my black, white and red colour theme looks professional whilst it also relates to the genre of my film.
On the other hand, to improve they said to get a better quality main image which I had intentions of doing. They also said to add a main cover line which shows the name of the film. They also said to add 'we' to 'go behind the scenes' to create a link between the magazine and the audience.